Score: 3

"Ohh......That's how you do it."

submission: SpeedAnimate:SakuraHentai

date: November 5, 2009

Sorry man, this is a real miss. It's amazing how many useless steps you went through for this...just...wow. I appreciate people wanting to pass on their methods, but the final result was nothing too special for all that. Cut the cheap tweening, and work on the anatomy a little bit. Your line art looks like you're drawing with your foot.

Score: 8

"Ha, sweet."

submission: Sketchbook Story

date: October 13, 2009

That was weird as hell, but entertaining. The character drawings and animation weren't do hot on most of it, but from the way some scenes looked, it kinda looked like you didn't break a sweat on purpose. I really enjoyed the concept of a world full of weird sketch creatures though, and how you just showed random stuff they do though, I found myself strangely drawn in.

Score: 8

"The dude who played the black guy and Krinkels..."

submission: Home of Madness

date: September 22, 2009

He's a genius, his acting was just fantastic, orgasmic, magical. No homo...or no hetero...? eh? eh? Didn't see that shit coming did you!?

Good shit man, your colors have really improved (way more realistic than normal) and the shots were more cinema and less flash cartoon, and of course, the VA was THE SHIT. Also, nice smooth keyframing for the most part. Only complaint, still gotta practice those art fundamentals like anatomy on the characters, but keep it up! =)

Score: 8

"You never cease to amaze me"

submission: Madness Duel

date: September 22, 2009

You have pretty much made your name in my book as the sickest fight animator on Newgrounds, shat horrible diarrhea all over the real Madness (Which works better than NyQuil if you can't sleep), and managed to instill horrible angry jealousy in me. The animation was okay, it seems a little wonky and rushed, and not so original with the fan cartoon premise, but damned if you didn't have the sickest shots and beastiest choreography I've seen in a Flash fight scene. Keep up the good work man, I love your shit.

Score: 8

"You had me up until the ending."

submission: Koden X Prologue Part 1

date: September 17, 2009

Nice colors, and visuals, the animation was kinda strange looking at times but the cartoon's graphics did it's job. The music was decent, as well as the sound effects. The voice acting was so-so through most of it, the actors aren't bad, but more realism, less anime in the voicing would've really turned this up a notch. The way you depicted all the random stuff around this world, the thieves, hunters, soldiers by the water, etc... I thought was really well done, and fun to watch.
Then it got to that last scene, mysterious guy found by sweet innocent girl, he's either an amnesiac or keeping his horrible violent past a secret, probably a legendary powerful warrior, somebody with demonic powers or something...that scene kinda ruineed it for me. But other than that, hope to see more, also hope it's not as generic unimaginative as that last scene. The rest was damn good though.

Score: 7

"Same complaints I guess."

submission: G.I.N.A

date: September 12, 2009

I thought it was a cool concept, people don't do the space thing too much on NG and the character designs were definitely the strong point. The pacing and music choice were also good.
But I have the same complaint with your stuff every time, the movements. Your animation comes off sometimes like you never touch the Onionskin and just make each frame in order from start to finish without looking back to check if the movement looks convincing, and your stuff ends up looking like 2001 flash when people were just kind of using it and didn't know its potential. I think you're full of great 80s-esque cartoon ideas, but the animation itself just robs it of all the fun for me.

Score: 8

"Very cool"

submission: Kaiblade Episode 2

date: August 31, 2009

This toon has great presentation, a little intro animation, a slick simplistic style, great voice acting and everything. I love the "camera-usage" effect too, there's lots of that and I think it looks cool as hell with your drawing style.

I have my complaints though, the story seems kinda weak at this point (Mysterious kid with big appetite....ugh...) but it's nothing that can't be improved, I've seen much worse. The biggest problem here is that this submission isn't satisfying at all. I realize that if you're making a series, it can relieve you of some storytelling obligations such as closure because there'll be more episodes, but wouldn't you want to give your fans a heaping helping of dat anime luvvin' instead of teasing them? I know I was waaay into it at that point where you cut it off. For a series like this, I think you should take at least a good 6-8 minutes to make sure you accomplish something storywise, and that your watchers walk away satisfied. That's just my opinion anyway, God knows I'm guilty of the same thing. Can't wait to see more, keep up the good work

Score: 9

"A true argument for the importance of presentation"

submission: Castle Repercussions - D2

date: August 28, 2009

It's amazing to me that you can make something like this with sticks, you truly tempt me. The sticks were.....well....sticks. But the backgrounds, and overall dark ambiance of the whole thing was just fantastic. The voice acting was choice, kudos, that stuck out to me in particular, and the music fit perfectly. You just....get lost in it, it's ridiculous how well you manage to set up a scene.
Some fBf would be nice, hell even if you want your characters to look dark and shadowy, I'd still like to see some real human anatomy regardless. Other than that, I have no other complaints. Grade-A entertainment.

Also, from that ending, I smell a sequel...

Score: 10

"The power and style Newgrounds is missing..."

submission: Tarboy

date: August 24, 2009

That was pretty damn sweet man. The drawings looked fantastic, as well as the character designs, the animation, and the backgrounds. It had perfect balance as far as detail, everything was in the right place. As much tweening as there was, it was seamless, you forget you're watching a web cartoon. The VA, sound, and storyline were also very, very well done. This is truly something amazing, loved it. 10/10.

Score: 8

"Love your new style"

submission: Life with Navi

date: August 19, 2009

Your new style is a huge step up from Asoaroki (I know I probably spelled that shit wrong), and I think it looks really good, it's also alot more animated. The movements look a bit strange though, because at some points old boy's face and anatomy changed shape really fast. I guess maybe as a suggestion, make sure to take close care that the anatomy stays consistent with animating unless the character is making a really fast movement. I think anything with shotguns is amusing, but I guess I didn't get a big laugh because I haven't touched a Zelda game since the original on NES. Regardless, looks good to me!